The quiet

StefanLindskog · 2014-04-23 01:08:15

Everybody in America are sleeping. Everybody in Europe are working. Man, what a drag. Stop having lives, damnit!

Pohaku · 2014-04-23 06:39:46

It's been quieter than usual this morning, I think. Or maybe the player numbers just continue to decline...

I'm around, quietly building!

ack2000 · 2014-04-23 08:10:03

Serious lack of players

http://steamcharts.com/app/249570#3m

mala · 2014-04-23 08:43:22

we need to increase the player base, if not with a sale, at least through advertising.

It's a great game, but as every other mmo... it needs players to be played.

Pumaroma · 2014-04-23 08:55:58

Agree with Mala. great game, but needs to increase player base.

TheRealCheese · 2014-04-23 09:00:50

mala your signature poem does not adhere to haiku rules.

mala · 2014-04-23 09:46:56

TheRealCheese wrote:

mala your signature poem does not adhere to haiku rules.

it's just a funny 3 sentences poem, but if you help me correct it i will

TheRealCheese · 2014-04-23 10:22:20

I agree it is a good poem, and for the longest time I assumed it was a haiku because it said that, but then I counted the syllables XD
A haiku has 5 syllables, then 7, then 5.
I go robbing now,
keep the children safe my dogs,
I might not return.

Cylence · 2014-04-23 11:27:36

Stefan, the forum is a bit quieter too. However it does pick up on weekends.

mala wrote:

TheRealCheese wrote:
mala your signature poem does not adhere to haiku rules.
it's just a funny 3 sentences poem, but if you help me correct it i will

Editing my place
Will be back after self-test
One wrong step, now dead

True Haiku Format (5,7,5)

Last edited by Cylence (2014-04-23 11:29:10)

gyuri · 2014-04-23 13:12:57

I hate to be a smart-ass, but I am one. A haiku has two more (in fact even more important than the syllables) elements: a juxtaposition of two images or ideas and a seasonal reference. Also the Japanese on is not exactly the same as a syllable, but that's not important, if you don't write in Japanese.

I can see the juxtaposition of two ideas in your haikus, but I really miss the seasonal reference

TheRealCheese · 2014-04-23 13:15:34

gyuri wrote:

I hate to be a smart-ass, but I am one. A haiku has two more (in fact even more important than the syllables) elements: a juxtaposition of two images or ideas and a seasonal reference. Also the Japanese on is not exactly the same as a syllable, but that's not important, if you don't write in Japanese.
I can see the juxtaposition of two ideas in your haikus, but I really miss the seasonal reference

I go robbing now,
keep the children safe my dogs,
my winter is near.

Cylence · 2014-04-23 14:00:36

gyuri wrote:

I hate to be a smart-ass, but I am one. A haiku has two more (in fact even more important than the syllables) elements: a juxtaposition of two images or ideas and a seasonal reference. Also the Japanese on is not exactly the same as a syllable, but that's not important, if you don't write in Japanese.
I can see the juxtaposition of two ideas in your haikus, but I really miss the seasonal reference

I don't want to hijack Stefan's quiet thread. My response to your requirements here.

gyuri · 2014-04-23 14:13:30

Thank you, much better

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